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MMMelody, June 19th, 2009, 12:31 am

Page 21!
looks like he's not there for Dahlia after all. ahaha. No heroes here folks.

The new voting incentive is the first page of the comic back when I first started working on it 2 years ago. the art is AWFUL. I warn you. vote to see it if you must. >__<

Also, I have 3 spots left for $5 commissions. If you're interested, you can check it out in my DA Journal or e-mail me melody.m.moore@gmail.com

http://mellowstrawberry.deviantart.com/journal/25279084

@BlackCatz: Ooh fun! I hope you got a lot of good stuff. Oh, and him showing up wasn't the surprise, it was supposed to be new features to the site, but I got busy with commissions. hehe. I guess the surprise is that there was no surprise.

@ horse_chic11: haha, nice spelling catch. It should be fixed now, thanks for letting me know. my photoshop's spell check doesn't work on this computer, and I'm horrible at spelling.

@ StellaCadente: hehehehe, he's not that Noble. But we should find out his intentions in the next couple pages.

@ armando: thanks as always!




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xhahakristinax, June 19th, 2009, 12:39 am


Haha, love the last panels of her expressions. XD


BlackCatz, June 19th, 2009, 1:04 am


I agree... the last 3 panels of Carlotta's expressions are great!

O.O I see... the surprise was to be the new features... well, commissions come first! XD lolz, that's actually the best kind of surprise..having notice of upcoming surprises! ...

I got some great stuff, and spent a ton of time in Artists Alley, talking to various artists and looking over their work... and getting some ideas of what they need from an editor (I work in my sparetime as a editor for various comic artists including those on SJ...I'm free for SJ artists!), so it was valuable getting feedback f2f of what they need and expect (I work mainly via email and PMs and the occasional MSN).


Henrike (Guest), June 19th, 2009, 2:35 am


:D Love the last panels!


horse_chic11, June 19th, 2009, 9:33 am

Ah...
I love how Carlotta pauses to contemplate what kind of weirdo she is. >.<

And Klaus is so very blunt with the people who've captured him. XD


StellaCadente, June 19th, 2009, 3:53 pm


Hehehe... I bet Dahlia and Klaus will sooner or later make great friends (or more ;P) and try to escape the pirates or something! I luv Carlotta's expressions! She's such a lovely character :D


67thavenue (Guest), June 19th, 2009, 6:51 pm


good stuff! i just caught up. last panel reminds of Depp when he was accused of being a cheater in Pirates.


digitkame, June 21st, 2009, 12:36 am


Love the captain's expression so much.


Skwinky, June 21st, 2009, 2:54 am


I love the progression at the bottom! You have wonderful characters~ I can't wait to see more.


BeachBumBill (Guest), June 21st, 2009, 8:55 am

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I just love the idea of a steampunk pirate comic. What a terrific concept.

A couple of minor art crits: In the middle panel there are some perspective problems. The doorway opening is larger than the actual door behind the sailor, this draws attention to the angle of the divider in the porthole, as it clashes with the floorline out in the passageway.

Also the area between the sailor's shoulder and neck gives the impression that his neck is sunken

Other than that, it s a great strip.


Stig Hemmer (Guest), June 21st, 2009, 2:37 pm

A pirate?
*gasp* She is a pirate? I would never have guessed!


Lasairiona (Guest), July 2nd, 2009, 11:59 am

huray
I love it when I find great comics :D. love the last 3 panels^^ :D


hiruda, July 6th, 2009, 9:58 pm


obviously~ XDDDDD she's got the eyepatch 8D


towr (Guest), July 31st, 2009, 4:18 am


I love that bottom series of panels; this is my favorite page so far.

I also love the site design, it's so relaxing compared to the usually over-crowded sites.


Dokidoki-rin, April 16th, 2010, 2:53 pm


AHAHA This captain is spectacular!! She's so funny.


Warholette, December 30th, 2010, 3:25 pm


The facial expression changing & her PIERCING *__*


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