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MMMelody, April 13th, 2009, 12:26 am

Page 02!
So, I actually had this page done and colored a month ago, but when I went to look at it, I realized how lazy and crappy looking the background was. Here, see for yourself, haha...

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7651/fsa02linessmdh6.jpg

Needless to say, the new background took all day, but it was sooo worth it. I like the painting style I used, it's gritty. So I think I'm going to go back and add for detail to Page 01 and paint it in a similar manner.

I notice that a lot of western comics generally put a lot more panels on a page than I feel comfortable with. Thus, my story seems to be developing much slower than it probably should. Do my pages seem too sparse to you guys? Any advice?




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xhahakristinax, April 13th, 2009, 1:52 am


She looks lovely in panel 2.


silversoul, April 13th, 2009, 8:36 am


All I have to say is DAMN, your art improved so much from the first couple of pages of Perfect Paranoia.

This story looks pretty good... Plus I love steampunk. Fav. <3


moobyj, April 13th, 2009, 2:37 pm


LOL! A steampunk watch. Brillant!


Bellaluna, April 13th, 2009, 3:19 pm


This looks great! Looking forward to more!


Yazzydream, April 13th, 2009, 3:31 pm


Well, right now it looks like your building up slowly. The less panels per page the more time a person spends looking at that page. If you want the readers' eyes to move across panels quickly you have some sort of element in the panel going left to right, or subtly pointing to the next panel. It's the other way around if your trying for the opposite reaction (in others you want the action to go slowly.) I'm not sure what you want pacing wise, but if you want it to start out slowly your doing really well.

If you just want to know if your pages look too sparse, then no. It looks fine. And your art is lovely. :D


MillieQOF, April 14th, 2009, 5:34 am


I heard somewhere that it's better to use less frames per page if you want the reader to pay more attention to the art.
I often find that if there are too many frames I read them faster to get through them. Also, I love your art!


Guest, April 20th, 2009, 1:35 am


The textures used in the background is great!Frankly,I prefer either bigger panels or less/a reasonable amount of panels in each page,as I like enjoying the art.One day I'll get a watch like hers.Someday.Somehow.


bright path comics, May 23rd, 2009, 9:18 am


Awsome comic.
I wouldn't worry about not having enough panels on a page. Web comics are so new that the rules havn't really been written yet and I think thats one of the coolest things about them.


Vulf (Guest), August 16th, 2013, 8:03 pm

Not Cool
Make a device hot enough to generate visible clouds of steam.
Strap it to your wrist.


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